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Fixed it :D

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My work here is done. :D *Noms on popcorn*

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The first - [link]
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Have I improved? ouo
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Approximately 14 frames.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

STELLA DON'T ASK TO ME TO CRITIQUE THIS AHHH.

WELL. There's not much for me to critique really. The anatomy looks good and the animation is JUST PLAIN AMAZING.

How the tail swishes in just looks amazing. I love that fluffy little tail.

But. When the cycle get to the yellow frame it looks a little jumpy, but I think its because of the color not the actual frame. Hope that made sense. *facedesk*

Stella I suck a critiquing bro. Sorry this isn't the best help, but I just can't find anything you need to improve on really.

Unless your going for realism. Then study that anatomy man. Like the face is a bit cartoon looking. But you get the point.

Amazing job bro ^-^