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Fixed it :D by inner-science Fixed it :D by inner-science
My work here is done. :D *Noms on popcorn*

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The first - [link]
The second - [link]

Have I improved? ouo
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Approximately 14 frames.
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:iconcactusfruits:
STELLA DON'T ASK TO ME TO CRITIQUE THIS AHHH.

WELL. There's not much for me to critique really. The anatomy looks good and the animation is JUST PLAIN AMAZING.

How the tail swishes in just looks amazing. I love that fluffy little tail.

But. When the cycle get to the yellow frame it looks a little jumpy, but I think its because of the color not the actual frame. Hope that made sense. *facedesk*

Stella I suck a critiquing bro. Sorry this isn't the best help, but I just can't find anything you need to improve on really.

Unless your going for realism. Then study that anatomy man. Like the face is a bit cartoon looking. But you get the point.

Amazing job bro ^-^
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shadowstripe01 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stellllllaaaaaa!!!!! This is epic!!! I really need to go through my inbox again DX as soon as I cleaned it, it was full again!!! I wantz to see morez of your artwork and improvements!!!!
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Alaricat Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ya you improved but *Rubs eyes* eyes no like flashing bright colors.
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:iconinner-science:
inner-science Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah ;^^

I just love rainbow cycles x33
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stellasaurassock Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
stunning! great work on the tail!
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:iconinner-science:
inner-science Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!! ^^ <33
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stellasaurassock Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np!
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inner-science Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
^^
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fskin Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just spent the past two minutes staring at this it's so beautiful <333

bro if you opened commissions for this and I had any points left I would so buy one eue
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:iconinner-science:
inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I really have to make a commission sheet ;u;

Thank yoooouu ahh <33
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CactusFruits Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
STILL SO AMAZING
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:iconinner-science:
inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Critique iiiiiiiitttt ;u;
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:iconcactusfruits:
CactusFruits Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ffffine
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay ouo
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Talidaga-Montrega Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
:D way cool
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you v//v
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CheenBeans Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So cute <3
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you v//v <33
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CactusFruits Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Holly shiz. Bro this is just amazing.
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Omf thank you v//v

I still think the first one is the best though o3o
//Lolno xDD
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CactusFruits Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh foreal girl XD
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Totally xDD

It beats this one by like, 413 landslides |D
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
And so are dA descriptions >:I


I can't have more than 10 frames if I want it animated. D:<
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R3llO Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
And what will it do if you try to add a new frame in photoshop?
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It says that I have to either reduce the file size or the number of layers. I tried reducing the file size but that didn't work >:c
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R3llO Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
What version of Photoshop are you using? (CS3 etc)
Cause I did all of my pervious animations on Photoshop CS3 at around 1000x1000 pixel box and they turned out fine, including one that was 35+ frames.
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's actually PS Elements 9 :I
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R3llO Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
That might be your problem then, try looking up "PS Element 9 animation problem" that might help.
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inner-science Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nope :c
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R3llO Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww well I'm sorry : / I'll ask my Commercial arts teacher and see if he has any advice (when I get back to school).
Maybe try saving this one as a GIF then copy the last frame past it into a new document and finish it in the other and then mash them together in Iaza.com or Jasc? That's all I can really can think of.
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